Here is the message I sent to my legal writing colleagues today.

Colleagues:

I'm writing to let you know that the Cooperation Committee has been working on annotating sample student work that has already been annotated by clinical professors.  The goal is to show what types of language legal writing and clinical professors use to explain similar concepts to students, as well as more generally how we tend to comment on student work.

The first sample is now available on the LWI page at this link http://www.lwionline.org/uploads/FileUpload/FirstPersonNarrativeredacted.pdf.

I thank Stacy Caplow of Brookyn Law School for providing the sample.

We hope to get a couple others up over the next several months.

Ariana